Bagel poem (in a bagel shape)

I may not be very good at writing poems, but I can make them into pretty shapes. Well, I can make one poem into a shape, anyway. I haven’t tried any other shapes. Any requests?

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This was one of my poems for TMA3. My tutor wasn’t very impressed. She said ‘blah blah blah’. Or something like that.

7 Comments

  1. Your tutor should have been impressed: I love this, it shows such a serendipity of images, and the shape is great!

  2. Looks like a doughnut to me.



  3. asome poem cathy

  4. I Love It ^-^ Orange? Cherry? Face? Sorry If These Requests Are Hard! ;D They Are The Only 1’s I Can Think Of. Good Luck On Then <3

    P.S Your tutor should have been like: Oh my! What A Splendid Poem!
    Not like: Blah blah blah blah blah!
    Ignore her just be proud of yourself that you get positive comments! :3

  5. yeah its great

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